Not a criticism, but
is she meant to look like someone's broken her wrists?
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Kerrisis There's someone in my head, but it's not me.,
Sat 19 May 2012, 10:26,
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It is supposed
to look as though she has been there a while and is weary, but I admit it doesn't come across very well.
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TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?,
Sat 19 May 2012, 15:49,
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