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Edit: I appreciate something about this post makes people want to ignore it, but I'd be grateful for any feedback as it's my first cartoon drawn from scratch and I'd like to improve.

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( drbroon drbroon.co.uk, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:43, archived)

coproliths ftw!

( Mighty Nibus SHUT UP YOU NOISY FUCKING GREEKS, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:44, archived)

haha!
*click*
( Caewan SIDEWAYS fucks YOU <3, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:45, archived)

HOLY SHIT! That's . . .
err . . .


( Sir Aunty Grampa Dave the Hat - Jaffa cakes only 500 calories per box - Ta! Cannaoogim!?, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:46, archived)

err?

( drbroon drbroon.co.uk, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:46, archived)

y'see . . . God is Holy . . . and he's, oh never mind


( Sir Aunty Grampa Dave the Hat - Jaffa cakes only 500 calories per box - Ta! Cannaoogim!?, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:51, archived)

ah yes
I understood that part, but i thought the "it's" was going to refer to something else.
( drbroon drbroon.co.uk, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:53, archived)

what 'it's'?


( Sir Aunty Grampa Dave the Hat - Jaffa cakes only 500 calories per box - Ta! Cannaoogim!?, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 11:00, archived)

oh "that's"
*smells ninja*
( drbroon drbroon.co.uk, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 11:03, archived)

That explains it!

( NinjaBadger hides in the bushes and gives you TB., Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:48, archived)

that's the creationist explanation
has the board been really slow today?

I'm on the edge of tears at the lack of response given it's my first attempt at a from scratch cartoon and it took me ages.

Maybe I'm just emotional today.
( drbroon drbroon.co.uk, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 10:50, archived)

pffft
'ning dbroon, how's yersel' ?
( Aphex The Mink Snackless, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 11:09, archived)

not bad til i posted this
now I'm in the huff because it took too long.

how's yourself?
( drbroon drbroon.co.uk, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 11:11, archived)

This is very ace, and far better than anything I could draw.
I don't htink you need any advice on how to improve if this is anything to go by...
( Sonic James Doom forgetting the date since... umm..., Mon 18 Jun 2007, 11:23, archived)

oh thanks very much
I was angry at not getting any feedback, rather than not getting any compliments but, thanks very much :D
( drbroon drbroon.co.uk, Mon 18 Jun 2007, 11:25, archived)