I made a short "visual adaptation" of an 18th Century poem by Robert Bloomfield about the South Downs. Filmed across the year at several locations and featuring local wildlife. Hope you enjoy! - "A First View of the Sea"
I made this!
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 10:47, Share, Reply)
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 10:47, Share, Reply)
Enjoyed very much
Would enjoy a twelve minute version too.
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 11:58, Share, Reply)
Would enjoy a twelve minute version too.
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 11:58, Share, Reply)
BRilliant and jolly moving
I recognise quite a few of those views and you've made them look even lovlier.
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 12:03, Share, Reply)
I recognise quite a few of those views and you've made them look even lovlier.
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 12:03, Share, Reply)
That was really good.
If I may be so presumptuous as to offer some constructive criticism; you've used far too much beautiful footage. It's overloaded with beautiful footage. Less is more. Less scenes. Less cuts. Linger. It will make it easier to appreciate the poetry too. Otherwise, excellent.
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 19:13, Share, Reply)
If I may be so presumptuous as to offer some constructive criticism; you've used far too much beautiful footage. It's overloaded with beautiful footage. Less is more. Less scenes. Less cuts. Linger. It will make it easier to appreciate the poetry too. Otherwise, excellent.
( , Mon 14 Sep 2020, 19:13, Share, Reply)