Matt & Steve's Lucrative Home Design Show
I made this!
It's like changing rooms but with a bloke dressed up like a woman yeah?
(, Mon 7 Mar 2011, 12:09, Reply)
There's some good jokes in this. I liked:
What the tilers in Morocco are doing.
The During Siberia joke.
The Elizabethan/ Victorian etc periods.
BUT. It's way waaaaaaay too long. Did you edit this yourselves? If so, I think you'd really benefit from an outside editor. Or just try to be more ruthless. Your intro, for example, is about 30 seconds. Most people will have moved on. And that's a shame. Because there is some funny stuff. Just need to cut out the fluff ! Anyway, click !
(, Mon 7 Mar 2011, 13:18, Reply)
agreed.
be ruthless on your edit.
some good stuff though. love the 'semi' puns.
(, Mon 7 Mar 2011, 13:56, Reply)