That's superbly well done.
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SpangoTheWonderBadger is brewing beer, Thu 20 Jun 2013, 12:31,
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It reads like a script, and it's got everything
Plot twists, character development, real warmth between the characters...
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MrOli is ugly, but in the morning you will be sober, Thu 20 Jun 2013, 12:46,
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