Not shite at all
the principal joke is excellent, and normal people will find it chuckle-worthy at least. the graphics are clear, and you have chosen an attractive young woman as the chief protagonist. the additional Ford reference is a bonus, and only a jaded pedant would seek to find fault in your skill and wit.
don't be too hard on yourself, your work is well above average for this site.
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Tue 24 May 2022, 22:50,
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don't be too hard on yourself, your work is well above average for this site.