I think a fadey red outline deal on the red corner things would pull it together
don't blur the edge, but give it some kind of blurriness around it so it works with background more.
And handwrite the text.
Otherwise I think it's kind of cool.
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hanke murphy, I'm a mess,
Sat 8 Sep 2007, 23:41,
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if I handwrote the text
no one would be able to read it.
plus, it would undermine the "futuristic" sense we were trying to establish as a band
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intesvensk can't recall when I last checked the newsletter,
Sat 8 Sep 2007, 23:45,
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I just thought there was kind of a disagreement between the shapes with kind of indefinate form and color
and the text and cornor dinguses, whose colors are very static and their form very crisp.
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hanke murphy, I'm a mess,
Sat 8 Sep 2007, 23:50,
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