Slick animation. Get a decent quality audio track on there and it'll be good.
Perhaps some instrumental music in the background? Sound effects? Might jazz it up a bit.
(, Tue 11 Nov 2008, 18:21, Reply)
The audio is going to be re-recorded by some Radio DJ, and soundmixed by someone else.
Sorry for not being clearer, thanks though.
(, Tue 11 Nov 2008, 18:25, Reply)