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I have gone and written a comedy series... NSFW I made this!
me and a couple of others have made a comedy series, and have shot a pilot episode to shop around to people for some funding.

this is the teaser trailer for said comedy series.

i hope you enjoy... you can learn more about the idea on it's own little website www.theundercoverhonda.com

(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:30, Share, Reply)

That's looks pretty darn good
You have my blessing, I will be keeping an eye out for Rob and Daz.
(thewankerstuff b3ta is like a whorehouse: full of cunts, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:34, Share, Reply)

we really did try hard
to get script and visuals tight.. those two actors are fucking ace too.
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:35, Share, Reply)

featuring Leyla K?
www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmSKk4BVtZc
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feckler https://twitter.com/LeonardEctric1, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:39, Share, Reply)

Is it the Honda of Justice?
Edit: That looks pretty good.
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evil_andy Stick stick stick stick sticky sticky stick stick, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:35, Share, Reply)

all hondas
are hondas of justice.
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:35, Share, Reply)

How did you afford Jack Black???

(Spin Its a thing., Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:36, Share, Reply)

we went back in time
and got him before he started working for dreamworks!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:37, Share, Reply)

that looks alright that does
I was going to add more, but deleted it as it just ended up being a rant about two pints of lager... 10 fucking years that was on... anyway, yeah that looks alright
(Ol' Ginger Bastard a role model for the children, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:37, Share, Reply)

fank you
very much.

yeah i actually wrote this after watching miranda and thinking... people aren't this stupid...
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:39, Share, Reply)

I fall off chairs and stools a lot more now
than I used to. I JUST WANT PEOPLE TO LOVE ME!!
(thewankerstuff b3ta is like a whorehouse: full of cunts, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:40, Share, Reply)

she's not even good at falling over
her prattfuls are rubbish!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:12, Share, Reply)

I hope you're not secretly thinking of a way
to get a pratfall into your show?
(thewankerstuff b3ta is like a whorehouse: full of cunts, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:14, Share, Reply)

no what i really want
is some canned laughter so that people know when the jokes are coming.
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:19, Share, Reply)

how much was the catering?

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feckler https://twitter.com/LeonardEctric1, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:37, Share, Reply)

it was of course
the most expensive thing on the shoot x
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:38, Share, Reply)

\o/
Last line ftw.
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Tab Hunter Make this useless process end and so, begin again, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:42, Share, Reply)

im happy to have lolled you
xx
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:44, Share, Reply)

That looks really good fella!
Best of British on gettin it commisioned.
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Redsushi! Whoop! Whoop! Yes, that one!, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:45, Share, Reply)

fingers crossed
especially since my mrs has got that "lets have kids and ruin our lives expression on her face every time she sees a baby" and i don't have the money for kids!

also i really want to see the other 5 episodes we haven't shot yet!!! but we cant afford to finance the whole series
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:46, Share, Reply)

good work mate
`lovely stuff
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crab_bloke), Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:50, Share, Reply)

your partly to blame for this...
seeing you get wormsley made was inspiring....

and seeing your throbbing member was terrifying.
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:51, Share, Reply)

Looks great. Made me laugh. Job done.
All the best fella.
(BarryFromTheShitFarm Oh, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:50, Share, Reply)

can't tell you how nervous i get
showing people thinking "laugh dammit" in my head... it's genuine panic attack time!

really happy it made you laugh, as that was the point. x
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:52, Share, Reply)

great stuff :D

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spesh., Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:57, Share, Reply)

thank you
:D
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 13:58, Share, Reply)

thumbs up from me
looks like you may have something there
(dirk speedrift Sit doon, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:00, Share, Reply)

huge sigh of relief
really happy people are enjoying it.
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:01, Share, Reply)

Excellent concept. well done you.

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Pig Bodine., Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:00, Share, Reply)

thanks man.
director and producer require a standing ovation for their input and execution too! big ups the prod and DIR
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:02, Share, Reply)

I enjoyed that :D

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revolution now 👊, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:02, Share, Reply)

they should make that an actual channel

(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:03, Share, Reply)

Nice :D
good luck with the series
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h3donist tryin' to play me out as if my name is Sega.., Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:07, Share, Reply)

i really want to get it made,
the other episodes have got some really cool moments in that would be cool to shoot!

fingers crossed! (it's mainly the arthritis)
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:08, Share, Reply)

Gets my vote

(SpangoTheWonderBadger is brewing beer, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:10, Share, Reply)

and i am grateful for it
thank you
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:11, Share, Reply)

Very good.
Carry on. We urgently need comedy.
(Octo I ruin everything., Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:14, Share, Reply)

and to any commissioners listening...
it won't cost much either... apart from the catering, its a fucking bargain!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:15, Share, Reply)

Looks good from where I'm sitting.

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TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:14, Share, Reply)

thank you ...
but i don't know where your sitting, if your back is turned and your hearing is blocked by pneumatic drills then that could be a really cutting insult...

or it could all be a ruse and you could be standing!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:17, Share, Reply)

Nice work, fella.
There's not enough imaginitive, well-acted comedy in this world. Best of luck.
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Fray Brentos *mega-belms*, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:27, Share, Reply)

cheers
for the support dude!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:32, Share, Reply)

It's weird seeing two of you on screen.
But it's mega as well. Everything's crossed.
(BoogalooShrimp With great wisdom comes expensive dentistry, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:44, Share, Reply)

that just sounds odd...
neither of those people are me, they are just speaking words i may have said myself once or twice!

ps dont cross your legs, its bad aparantley
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:47, Share, Reply)

Mescaline is a hell of a drug.

(BoogalooShrimp With great wisdom comes expensive dentistry, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 15:20, Share, Reply)

Ace!
I was thinking about this just recently, can you tell an entire story without leaving the car? Evidently the answer is yes.

Reservoir Dogs paved the way I suppose by not showing the stereotypically exciting part. Or maybe "Macbeth", where most of the actual killing happens off-stage. Either way, the interesting thing is how ACTION isn't what tells the story, it's the buildup and the aftermath, both of which might well happen in the same car. It's an excellent choice of conceit and, incidentally, a money-saving one.

If it's as good as that last line there you should have no trouble. I'm tempted to ask what it would cost to finish the series but, not working in the industry, I rather think I'd be a bad investor for you in every other way.
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pineapplecharm D d M Y, H:i, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:51, Share, Reply)

in terms of never leaving the car...
there's a number of devices i've tried to work into each episode that give you a wider sense of freedom as it was my main concern... that's why i'd like to get some funding to finish it, becuase those moments are really good fun (i think) and think people would get a kick out of it.

also Marion and Jeff made me realise that if you work hard enough you can contain a story in a car...

in terms of what it would cost that's my producers area of expertise, i know that its cheap compared to most other comedy series of similar length and time... but not so cheap that we can shoot it ourselves (we all put a bit of cash in for the pilot)
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 14:59, Share, Reply)

That looks great!
Best of luck.
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BaronMunchausen Interdimensional Demon Day Laborer, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 15:51, Share, Reply)

thanks very
much!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 16:39, Share, Reply)

very interesting
good luck with that
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mutated monty, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 16:12, Share, Reply)

cheers
and thank you.
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 16:38, Share, Reply)

Looks good, hope it takes off
However, is it Daren or Darren? The video says the former, the web site the latter.
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reallywittyname veraciously conspues lexiphanicism on, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 16:22, Share, Reply)

it's one r
the web copy was autocorrected, they dont like irish names.
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 16:37, Share, Reply)

Similar to a Mafia surveillance tape that turned up a few years ago, the amount of desperate penny pinching scamming being planned to, apparently, barely make minimum wage hardly seemed worth the risk.
(Benzyl, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 20:52, Share, Reply)

crime doesnt pay
but the hours are brilliant
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 21:42, Share, Reply)

Excellent!
can't wait to see it on TV
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CysticSpazzGland has just puwked on your mum, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 21:12, Share, Reply)

or streamed...
we aren't fussy!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Thu 11 Jul 2013, 21:43, Share, Reply)

That actually looks good!
Which by British TV comedy standards is quite the rarity these days.

Go for it and good luck!
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sir_spicious2000 Crap I've watched: www.filmplop.blogspot.com/, Fri 12 Jul 2013, 9:35, Share, Reply)

if this was the x-factor
i'd go on about my dead mum (still alive) and how i really WANT this...
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Fri 12 Jul 2013, 10:48, Share, Reply)

haha looks ace
good actors make all the diff. A lot of youtube peeps should take note.
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it's when the words actually have life...
these two are both really good too... i expect to see them in proper things!
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Fri 12 Jul 2013, 13:33, Share, Reply)

That actually looks rather good.
So fed up of seeing unfunny mercan sitcoms and canned laughter.
This really made me giggle.
Please don't let Ricky (unfunniest arsehole in the universe)Gervais get involved with it and spoil what could well be the funniest thing for years.
(Captain Spacker I lick windows, Fri 12 Jul 2013, 17:22, Share, Reply)

yay
i wrote it becuase there wasn't anything i wanted to watch that was my cup of tea...glad to know it's resonating with others
(DefyingDarwin Old, untalented and white,, Fri 12 Jul 2013, 17:24, Share, Reply)

ace
Look for crowd funding sites. Don't know the UK versions but they're out there.
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deodar ant trois minutes douche compris, Sat 13 Jul 2013, 20:45, Share, Reply)

That looks really good
I would definitely watch it, hope it gets made!
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kfk I get all my everything right here, Mon 15 Jul 2013, 12:47, Share, Reply)