hmmm I wasn't too sureabout the ending of it, it all seemed a tad trite.
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Pootle,
Wed 2 Apr 2003, 17:49,
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the ending to gfiacpissed me off somewhat,
and afap(s) was a little patchy, but still good
(and afap(s) was a little patchy, but still good
mictoboy shitting in your cunt since,
Wed 2 Apr 2003, 17:53,
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oh - the blood transfusion nonsenseseemed a cheap way out at the end to me.
( Pootle,
Wed 2 Apr 2003, 17:55,
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yeahit was a good idea, but it seemed a little to neat, well written but, y'know, not right.
talking of blood transfusion nonsense, Near Dark anyone?
(talking of blood transfusion nonsense, Near Dark anyone?
mictoboy shitting in your cunt since,
Wed 2 Apr 2003, 17:59,
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