heh thats just greathowever I have some tips to make it a bit better (I'm used to be a video editor) if you don't mind :)
Remove the dissolves for the text, just cut right into them and back out
Put more looking shots in there every so often
Take out a few frames from the action once a while, as if the film had been badly spliced - put a big POP on the audio track when u do it
Change the contrast of the film on some cuts, so it looks like its been shot on different stock
Anyway, its belting as it is, well done!
(Remove the dissolves for the text, just cut right into them and back out
Put more looking shots in there every so often
Take out a few frames from the action once a while, as if the film had been badly spliced - put a big POP on the audio track when u do it
Change the contrast of the film on some cuts, so it looks like its been shot on different stock
Anyway, its belting as it is, well done!
Pew Pew Pew! Lasers! wannabe Gong Farmer,
Mon 29 Nov 2004, 14:00,
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