Very nice.I think the left arm needs to bulge out a bit more at the shoulder like he/she has got an actual ball socket.
Also you would need to get rid of the black line nearer the top so it looks like it's actually the same piece of fabric.
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Sat 16 May 2009, 14:50,
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Also you would need to get rid of the black line nearer the top so it looks like it's actually the same piece of fabric.
I see the perspective there hasn't worked fully then.He's turned towards us in a jaunty manner.
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Rev. Cleo still alive,
Sat 16 May 2009, 15:01,
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Hmmm. Yeah I don't think the left shoulderpad has the right shape or angles to make it look that shoulder is facing away.Personally I'd just square up the top of the shoulder a bit more so you've got a little bit of bulge out.
I think if you wanted the shoulder to be facing away you'd have to have the left arm pop out from behind his shoulder a bit further down and maybe lose a bit of the left wing behind his shoulder.
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Sat 16 May 2009, 15:09,
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I think if you wanted the shoulder to be facing away you'd have to have the left arm pop out from behind his shoulder a bit further down and maybe lose a bit of the left wing behind his shoulder.
This look a bit better?
Also messed to see if I could bring out the blacks okay with a different colour background.
Rev. Cleo still alive,
Sat 16 May 2009, 15:30,
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