It is
lacking something (talent?) to bind it together IMO
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TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?,
Sat 26 Sep 2009, 18:55,
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I think the background
is too neutral to bring the 2 elements together, beautiful scenery for a bit of duality with the sadness of the mood and all that
edit: having said that though, I like very much, very Pro Patria Mori
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Marty McFly can't grate cheese without getting angry,
Sat 26 Sep 2009, 19:45,
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thank you
I thought the same, but have no ideas how to improve it as yet.
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TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?,
Sat 26 Sep 2009, 21:44,
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