Your composition has a nice strange way of advancing !
Valin I changed glasses while I wasn't looking,
Thu 12 Nov 2009, 21:57,
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Thankyou :]I'm trying to make it draw the reader further in, toward the distance.
I had to cut one of the six, I'll replace it with something else at the end.
(I had to cut one of the six, I'll replace it with something else at the end.
ClanSoul,
Thu 12 Nov 2009, 22:01,
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