For what it's worth, I think it's definitely got potential
The problem I see is that 10 minutes is a very short time to establish each individual character, and a comedy like this has got to have really strong characterisation to drive the LOLs.
You could just throw some more "jokes" in there, but since watching Detectorists I'm less of a fan of overt jokes, as such.
Well done, and I especially like the old geezer.
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Mr Mann I love pigs, best of all the animals, Tue 8 Dec 2015, 16:04,
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