Hey man, good effort
You asked for responses, and a day later I see it has none. You said "be nice", but to be honest... it's utter shite. Hope you appreciate the honesty. I could explain why more, if you want; there's no character, no chemistry, nothing to grab any attention. You have 5 seconds,go... nah? Well, next. Sorry, that's YouTube. The "gimmick" of being drunk fails, because... well, you're not drunk... you'd have to be rolling around doing ridiculous things. If you want YouTube fame, IDK man...get lucky... get a personality... investigate suicide forests. If that's not your thing then fair crack to you, me neither. But I humbly suggest this venture needs work to succeed. You *can* make a video, that doesn't really mean you should. If you cut that vid down to 20 seconds, it might be acceptable, ish.
(, Thu 28 Jun 2018, 20:06, Reply)
