That was really good.
If I may be so presumptuous as to offer some constructive criticism; you've used far too much beautiful footage. It's overloaded with beautiful footage. Less is more. Less scenes. Less cuts. Linger. It will make it easier to appreciate the poetry too. Otherwise, excellent.
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Prufrock Lucifer, son of the morning!, Mon 14 Sep 2020, 19:13,
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