You need to work on removing the punctuation
Jesus guns babies, that would really upset people.
The idea of The Messiah with a(n) M16 gunning down innocents, that'd be really eye catching.
All I have seen suggests that she is using bullet points or commas; I know, they should have been semi-colons for a list and some of them were patriotic red stars; you can't hold Americans to the same standards of English, because they aren't
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An Egg ,D, Sun 20 Feb 2022, 2:23,
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