That's great. As a piece of constructive criticism, I would suggest re-recording some of the voices, which have some strange acoustics and breath noise at times.
(, Sat 17 May 2008, 2:33, Reply)
I'm just a simple guy with a shitty mic, i did my best :B
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Scrambled Edd www.eddsworld.co.uk, Sat 17 May 2008, 12:14,
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