On closer inspection...
She is not a great writer. This is partly because of her views which as everyone has already said, are slightly juvenile and less funny than she thinks.
But the main problem is her writing style. The sentences lack structure and have no rhythm making them almost unreadable. I suspect this will come with practice.
As for content... hopefully it will improve as she matures but for now I would recommend that she reads QOTW. some of the best an most genuinely funny writing anywhere!
(, Wed 17 Dec 2008, 14:41, Reply)