Not a bad read...
...and I agree with some of your reviews. I would recommend the use of a decent spell checker though!
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the bonzo dog , down on Jollity Farm on, Sun 15 Feb 2009, 13:54,
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yeah
I am sure this will improve as time goes on, and I start remembering to do a review before the early hours of the morning when I am not particularly awake!
(, Sun 15 Feb 2009, 13:55, Reply)