Constructive hypocrisy:
Webcomics are hard, only the best ever get anywhere or last more than a few months...
Of course if you're doing it for fun and putting your stuff out there, it's commendable, but (imo) you've either got to have great art (like dresden codak or the damage is irreversible) or great writing (like xkcd or dinosaur comics).
So, erm, try to find an artist/polish your writing if you're really serious. Otherwise, just keep doing what you're doing, I'm sure there's plenty of space on the internet for your brand of webcomic-ery.
(Hrm, that could have been gentler).
(, Fri 20 Feb 2009, 13:48, Reply)
Completely fair criticism, thanks!
I'm not intending this to be an XKCD beater, or even something I can get money from, I just like making them :)
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Labia Majora You keep on talking but it makes no sense at all, Fri 20 Feb 2009, 13:52,
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each of your frames' text should naturally read left to right then from top to bottom.
there's nothing worse than accidentally reading the punchline before you've read the set up :)
(, Fri 20 Feb 2009, 15:30, Reply)