Definately.
It's cool - I like it. All the advice below plus my 0.0002c. The tracking is slightly off on the eye, particularly at the beginning (the skin stretches also).
You could disguise it somewhat if you added a bit of artificial camera shake to the whole shot (zoom in slightly to lose the edges) and a tiny bit of noise.
But try and fix the track as much as possible if you can because that's what will help sell-it.
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JamTallons, Tue 20 Jul 2010, 22:35,
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