Faking itRakky writes, "We've all done it. From qualifications to orgasms, everyone likes to play 'let's pretend' once in a while."
So when have you faked it? Did you get away with it? Or were your mendacious ways exposed?
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chthonic, Thu 10 Jul 2008, 15:16)
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I'll AddMy voice to the chorus.
I didn't even even read your story as it's too painful to look at.
That said, edit it and add paragraphs and breaks and I'll definitely read it.
This isn't a flame. I'm trying to be helpful. If you want people to read your tales you have to make them readable.
Good luck.
Cheers
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Legless Mister Stabby - shanks for the memory, Mon 14 Jul 2008, 12:05,
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