Faking itRakky writes, "We've all done it. From qualifications to orgasms, everyone likes to play 'let's pretend' once in a while."
So when have you faked it? Did you get away with it? Or were your mendacious ways exposed?
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chthonic, Thu 10 Jul 2008, 15:16)
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Agree with Le PenseurWelcome to B3ta.. thanks for posting. I hope you enjoy it here.
As has been said, I hope you don't get put off by this, but you need to remember two things:
1) Please write properly. If a piece of writing is less than readable, then it does rather encourage people to skip it. I want my brain power used in understanding and enjoying a story; not diverted towards decyphering poorly-punctuated sentences.
2) Your story seems interesting enough. However, you should flesh it out a bit. Explain exactly why she was a "psycho bitch". It might be amusing :)
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