I think this is superb, but I'd like to offer some criticism, which may or may not be right.I think the speed with which the hand moves back to the left is too fast - peradventure it would work better if you reverse the order of some frames so that the mouth is done left to right across the top and then right to left at the bottom?
Also, if there were a middle frame to the pout, we could have the colour fade, so that it looped, rather than restarted?
This is meant to be friendly and is based on the fact that this is awesome and I do not think I could do it as well as it is already done, so please do not take offence.
(Also, if there were a middle frame to the pout, we could have the colour fade, so that it looped, rather than restarted?
This is meant to be friendly and is based on the fact that this is awesome and I do not think I could do it as well as it is already done, so please do not take offence.
LordManley twitter.com/LordManley,
Mon 29 Nov 2010, 20:30,
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I always welcome constructive criticism...it really helps as lots of details are often overlooked...these that you mention are spot on(very much like things that I've remembered in other animations,just at the last minute...extra frames.looping etc)....so in essence I fully appreciate the advice here.....cheers:D
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Elvis impersonator,
Mon 29 Nov 2010, 20:38,
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On the other handit's funny as it is, and none of that would make it any funnier.
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Mon 29 Nov 2010, 21:21,
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your right there....it's jokes before technique at the end of the dayfinal tweaks probably go un-noticed but serve only a fickle inner satisfaction.....must admit I'm happier with it since the re-vamp.............on with new stuff now(with a bit of luck) :D
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Mon 29 Nov 2010, 21:51,
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I agree with this.I just like advice on my own work. I normally keep myself to myself, as you know, but I liked this a lot.
( LordManley twitter.com/LordManley,
Tue 30 Nov 2010, 0:30,
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