
Recommendations:
Spike Milligan's Bad Jelly the Witch, and
any short writings of HP Lovecraft.
Your yarn has elements of both. Keep reading/writing!
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Mon 6 Dec 2010, 0:59,
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Spike Milligan's Bad Jelly the Witch, and
any short writings of HP Lovecraft.
Your yarn has elements of both. Keep reading/writing!

Most of my short stories contain Lovecraftian stylings.
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Mon 6 Dec 2010, 1:11,
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You've clearly got a distinctive style of your own; but it might amuse you to read "Bad Jelly the Witch" in the light of the above tale.
Mind you, Amazon are asking £164.95 for it at the moment, which seems a tad steep.
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Mon 6 Dec 2010, 1:18,
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Mind you, Amazon are asking £164.95 for it at the moment, which seems a tad steep.