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perhaps a more logical way to say it is : If this ain't logical then logic is in some small way poorer for it's absence.
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Tue 16 Aug 2011, 22:12,
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Hehe
What your revised sentence gains in logic it loses in poetic succinctness :)
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Tue 16 Aug 2011, 22:22,
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