
even if b3ta was the sort of place where people get a stiffy over a bear dressed as a policewoman, your drawings are depressingly average. It's a cartoon, so you should to exaggerate the action a bit. If you're doing that pose it really needs to look as if she's about to punch the air. And there's no personality in her face either. The whole thing is just lifeless. As such I don't see how you can really expect it to have much appeal outside the diehard yiff community.
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