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# Actually, he looks pretty hard in the second one, and kind of a softy in the first one.
(, Mon 5 Oct 2015, 3:25, archived)
# Yep, I do that too often with my stuff.
It should cause an inversion of thought, for a beat, then the punchline hits.
Doesn't always work as expected, it sometimes falls flat or as too obscure.
(, Mon 5 Oct 2015, 6:01, archived)