I feel the personification of doubt was a particularly effectiveway of portraying the difficulty of the choices the protagonist faced albeit not entirely easy to follow from time to time. The interesting use of neologisms gives it a really classical feel too which compliments the somewhat rough grammar nicely.
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Wed 19 Oct 2005, 1:11,
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Soin other words it's shite?
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Flowerpot No longer has the vapours thanks to DTH,
Wed 19 Oct 2005, 1:18,
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Erm bananasyes, bananas
( Flowerpot No longer has the vapours thanks to DTH,
Wed 19 Oct 2005, 1:22,
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Mr The Neville, you haven't got a clue about BananasCease this mockery!
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Wed 19 Oct 2005, 1:23,
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J Micheal Straczynski
Was raking through my binski
He found himself a tinski
Of Tennents Lager... -inski.
(Was raking through my binski
He found himself a tinski
Of Tennents Lager... -inski.
The Neville What what what,
Wed 19 Oct 2005, 1:22,
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