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# The background
looks very good to me. Although I suspect you rushed the rest ;)
I must learn how to do this, I have a back catalogue of ideas. Good attempt sir.
(, Mon 21 Nov 2005, 22:15, archived)
# thanks
I thought the background was the faultiest bit though!
(, Mon 21 Nov 2005, 22:17, archived)
# now
that's where you go wrong

bg is actually fine
(, Mon 21 Nov 2005, 22:20, archived)
# looks good to me
although I might have personally chopped out the taller tree that appears on the right as it's distracting when it keeps popping in.
( I read a tutorial by a b3tan saying you should always try and keep the lines at the edge of frames pretty similar to give the illusion of clean flow or some bollox.)
As I have said I've not attempted it yet so it's a woo and a yay from me.
(, Mon 21 Nov 2005, 22:20, archived)
# I see what you mean
but this was my first experiment. Hopefully, if I do another, I'll have more patience to sort it out better.
(, Mon 21 Nov 2005, 22:23, archived)