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# You'ld be better off
making that story have a few more incredulities in it, the current ones, like 'lost the use of his face' are a bit subtle, IMO.

I like the 'unknown man goes into shop' story, though. That's good.
(I helped save b3ta! pagram, Mon 6 Jan 2003, 18:45, archived)
# well, like i said
i have just thrown it together, i really should have mentioned that this is kind of a draft.
(rnuk http://flickr.com/rnuk, Mon 6 Jan 2003, 18:47, archived)