What's with the coolie hats?
Also I'm not sure the texture on the trees in the background works against the flat colour of the rest of the picture.
and the people are pretty much stick figures.
/picky
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Rapitinui get in the cage and I'll give you a treat,
Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:55,
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/picky is appreciated! I really need all of the feedback I can get... Thanks!
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Tombre,
Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:09,
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now that im sobering
i think that the line thicknesses need addressing. the line around the chain is thicker than the line around the boat, which just doesnt sit right in my mind.
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Rails [*·:·],
Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:23,
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