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# Could you
...take a look at this, please? It's a page for a children's book called 'Across the Wide Ocean' that I'm doing for an Illustration class at Uni.






...Comments? Critiques? Silly remarks?
(Tombre, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:52, archived)
# its quite cool
may need a little more cdc,
but otherwise sweet!
(I helped save b3ta! Rails [*·:·], Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:53, archived)
# cdc?
/confused
(Tombre, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:09, archived)
# Crudely Drawn Cock
(I helped save b3ta! BargeArse Maker of fine Trouser Trumpets since 1863, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:11, archived)
# You have much to learn
Padawan
(I helped save b3ta! Master Of Turnips. Only gays and morons believe in ghosts., Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:12, archived)
# well done!
HOLY SHIT, A POPE-SIZED DUCK
(I helped save b3ta! Sexy Picard 2000, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:55, archived)
# What's with the coolie hats?
 
Also I'm not sure the texture on the trees in the background works against the flat colour of the rest of the picture.

and the people are pretty much stick figures.

/picky
(I helped save b3ta! Rapitinui get in the cage and I'll give you a treat, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:55, archived)
#
/picky is appreciated! I really need all of the feedback I can get... Thanks!
(Tombre, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:09, archived)
# YOUR ACCENT IS RUBBISH, AND YOU SMELL OF POO
(I helped save b3ta! gronkpan @vomitinglarry.bsky.social, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:10, archived)
# now that im sobering
i think that the line thicknesses need addressing. the line around the chain is thicker than the line around the boat, which just doesnt sit right in my mind.
(I helped save b3ta! Rails [*·:·], Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:23, archived)
# Very good!
You could possibly add a submerged Russian Sub or a U-boat....
(I helped save b3ta! BargeArse Maker of fine Trouser Trumpets since 1863, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:56, archived)
# HAGENDAAS.
(I helped save b3ta! gronkpan @vomitinglarry.bsky.social, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:57, archived)
# DAMN YOU'RE JUST MAKING ME HUNGRY NOW.
(I helped save b3ta! Rapitinui get in the cage and I'll give you a treat, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 5:57, archived)
# me two
But its been so hot over here... that i've had to replace Ice Cream for beer!
(I helped save b3ta! BargeArse Maker of fine Trouser Trumpets since 1863, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:04, archived)
# Christians in China/Asia theme?
I like the cut away water(always a tough one).
(I helped save b3ta! Tahkcalb ω∞ for sigs, Thu 2 Nov 2006, 6:00, archived)