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# Poor syntax.
Try harder.
(, Fri 30 Nov 2007, 22:59, archived)
# I'm not sure I know what that means
(, Fri 30 Nov 2007, 22:59, archived)
# The sentence
"Try putting a shopped picture you made yourself in it" is poorly formed, syntactically. The word order is clumsy.
I wouldn't normally say anything, but HappyToast has had 3 bottles of wine and I'm concerned about his reaction to this.
(, Fri 30 Nov 2007, 23:02, archived)
# I know it was poorly formed
It's because I typed it out once, then found I'd missed out 'shopped' so I went back, put it in and moved a word or two, now it sounds all rubbish.
But I can't be bothered retyping it.
(, Fri 30 Nov 2007, 23:04, archived)
# I understand completely
and I sympathize, I really do.
HT is going to fucking gut you like a fish though.
(, Fri 30 Nov 2007, 23:05, archived)