SuggsBigger, more even tree - it looks 'forced' to lean this way; smaller man; more graduated rainbow; bigger noose; The bold red leads the eye away too much - maybe try a ground of some kind (like windows wallpaper?); I do like his stance and 'expression' (if you can call it that from the back).
Branches are hard; I'd suggest looking at lots of pics of real trees, and cribbing one.
HTH;
Nice concept
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Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:53,
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Branches are hard; I'd suggest looking at lots of pics of real trees, and cribbing one.
HTH;
Nice concept
