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# How can i improve this?
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:33, archived)
# Make the branches more angular?
And less sausage like?
(I helped save b3ta! Rev. Cleo still alive, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:34, archived)
# Thanks
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:34, archived)
# Needs more
gay.
(I helped save b3ta! P3L3 is not my real name., Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:34, archived)
# *bumsexes*
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:34, archived)
# Well, it's that time...
(I helped save b3ta! struthers when you call my name it's like a little prayer, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:36, archived)
# Once again Hedonism Bot Does His Daily Duty And Declares:
(I helped save b3ta! P3L3 is not my real name., Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:47, archived)
# Here's some more gay I'm working on
Photobucket
(I helped save b3ta! Rev. Cleo still alive, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:50, archived)
# !
(I helped save b3ta! arrangedletters, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:53, archived)
# Pfft/
(I helped save b3ta! Rev. Cleo still alive, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:55, archived)
# happy yaoi fun teim ^__^
(I helped save b3ta! moohalaa, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 2:08, archived)
# And I'm getting better at drawing it!
(I helped save b3ta! Rev. Cleo still alive, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 2:08, archived)
# Needs more
lube.
(I helped save b3ta! P3L3 is not my real name., Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:36, archived)
# Blur
the rainbow colours a bit?
Looks good so far...
(I helped save b3ta! struthers when you call my name it's like a little prayer, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:34, archived)
# They look better in the wallpaper version.
But i shall on this too, and make sure on the other
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:35, archived)
# ^this
And add some form of subtle texture to them to retract from the paint-esque look of it.

Looking good thus far though.
(I helped save b3ta! Tu9 01100011011101010110111001110100, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:36, archived)
# Thanks yoou
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:38, archived)
# make the noose pink
(I helped save b3ta! Bloop Fri 16 Jul, 22:10, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:35, archived)
# haha :D
I do everything in gray and only the background in colour..although that tree looks a bit brown..
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:37, archived)
# ^this also.
(I helped save b3ta! Tu9 01100011011101010110111001110100, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:37, archived)
# Leave out the duck . . .
It looks like you want . . . that's fine . . .
(I helped save b3ta! Valin I changed glasses while I wasn't looking, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:36, archived)
# two tone the rainbow. It looks harsh
but otherwise nice
(k3b/-\b Peace man., Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:38, archived)
# Thanks, i'm going to work on it tommorow morning
i will keep all this in mind, and even make a pink noosed version just for bloop and tu9.
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:42, archived)
# Don't try and draw a tree from your mind.
DO SOME FUCKING STUDIES OF A TREE. IS THAT MEANT TO BE A TREE? HAVE YOU EVER SEEN A FUCKING TREE?
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:52, archived)
# Also, those colours are far too harsh.
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:55, archived)
# I have always been shit at drawing trees.
I'll try again though.
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:59, archived)
# Try
'shopping an appropriate tree image and turning the brightness right down so it's just black/grey.
(I helped save b3ta! struthers when you call my name it's like a little prayer, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 2:04, archived)
# Do some first hand studies. It's the best way to improve.
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 2:11, archived)
# Suggs
Bigger, more even tree - it looks 'forced' to lean this way; smaller man; more graduated rainbow; bigger noose; The bold red leads the eye away too much - maybe try a ground of some kind (like windows wallpaper?); I do like his stance and 'expression' (if you can call it that from the back).
Branches are hard; I'd suggest looking at lots of pics of real trees, and cribbing one.
HTH;

Nice concept
(SockCooker ПТН ПНХ, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 1:53, archived)
# Hehe, looks like i need to do a whole re-do :)
(I helped save b3ta! Cae1, Thu 24 Jul 2008, 2:01, archived)