i would say
get rid of the hair highlights just below the brim, as it should probably be in shadow.
it looks like the shadow on the brim should go to the back of the hat instead of straight to the left, either that or the hat should be shaded more gradually across the hat
otherwise, woo!
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Fri 1 Aug 2008, 23:58,
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it looks like the shadow on the brim should go to the back of the hat instead of straight to the left, either that or the hat should be shaded more gradually across the hat
otherwise, woo!