alsothe perspective seems bit a bit off, given that the building is seemingly some way in the background and the angle of line moving towards the vanishign point it would assume you were looking up towards somethign relatively tall.
This means for the woman to be in shot down the front it would have to be from a very low angle in which case the angle from shich she is drawn is off, or the 'camera' would have to be somewhat closer to her, meaning she should be relatively bigger in the image.
Making her a bit larger and shifting to the left somewhat to lessen the gap inbetween may result in a more cohesive image.
Though, this is all thinking of things from a slightly more realism angle rather than purely artistically, so keep that in mind too.
(This means for the woman to be in shot down the front it would have to be from a very low angle in which case the angle from shich she is drawn is off, or the 'camera' would have to be somewhat closer to her, meaning she should be relatively bigger in the image.
Making her a bit larger and shifting to the left somewhat to lessen the gap inbetween may result in a more cohesive image.
Though, this is all thinking of things from a slightly more realism angle rather than purely artistically, so keep that in mind too.
StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list,
Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:50,
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your other ideaswere fun tho'.
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TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?,
Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:59,
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I'm so proud!*sheds single tear*
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Sat 2 Aug 2008, 18:02,
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