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# You know when something
is NEARLY right...


But just needs that little 'magic'? I can't put my finger on what is wrong here, although something is.
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:40, archived)
# stars and a cloud
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:41, archived)
# LOOK OUT THE MONOLITH TRAIN IS GOING TO RUN YOU THE FUCK OVER
(I helped save b3ta! Shada, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:41, archived)
# -the person looks incredibly fuzzy while the whatever the black thing is is incredibly smooth
-the scenery is a bland gradient, there's no indication of where they are or what's happening
-what is that black thing?
-why is she sad? is she sad about the black thing?
(I helped save b3ta! Shada, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:44, archived)
# Hmmmm
So just about everything then. Back to the drawing board!
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:48, archived)
# a plough on the forn tof the building
to make it look like a train
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:41, archived)
# Nice :]
It seems a bit...empty
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:42, archived)
# the moon
on a stick
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:42, archived)
# Oh, and for interest:


Some pics as I made it
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:42, archived)
# :D
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:43, archived)
# bit too wide, the building and person seem to be parts of seperate images
there's no coherence holding them together.
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:42, archived)
# I see that
ta. Learning as I go!
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:44, archived)
# dear god
don't take me seriously!
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:45, archived)
# :D
But you made sense!
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:46, archived)
# also
the perspective seems bit a bit off, given that the building is seemingly some way in the background and the angle of line moving towards the vanishign point it would assume you were looking up towards somethign relatively tall.
This means for the woman to be in shot down the front it would have to be from a very low angle in which case the angle from shich she is drawn is off, or the "camera" would have to be somewhat closer to her, meaning she should be relatively bigger in the image.

Making her a bit larger and shifting to the left somewhat to lessen the gap inbetween may result in a more cohesive image.

Though, this is all thinking of things from a slightly more realism angle rather than purely artistically, so keep that in mind too.
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:50, archived)
# your other ideas
were fun tho'.
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:59, archived)
# I'm so proud!
*sheds single tear*
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 18:02, archived)
# My tears are all warehouses.
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 18:09, archived)
# More memes and Star Wars references
Ideally obscure.

Other than that, very nice. Are the bottom of the Ls following perspective? Difficult to tell...
(I helped save b3ta! Tribs 🦇 ↓ dn ʎɐʍ sᴉɥʇ ↓🦇, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:44, archived)
# charles dance
milking a goose
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:44, archived)
# the seeming lack of reason for the building to be so darkly shadowed
yet the person is well lit
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:45, archived)
# A sombrero and big 'tache
maybe also a cigar.
(I helped save b3ta! StickFigureNinja is worried he may be on the list, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 17:46, archived)
# The perspective on the building (train, black thing) doesn't join up

It also seems unexpectedly tall. And the horizon is missing, unless we're up in the air somewhere.

...oh, SFN said all that. Well he's right.
(_Felix 's school of dance and occult sciences, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 18:18, archived)
# Thanks;
I think I understand. I only started 'drawing' a couple of years ago so there are rules I have yet to learn. I wasn't allowed to take Art at school way back when either.
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 19:52, archived)
# perhaps
the building behind wants to be slightly blurred to give more of a sense of perspective
nice image tho ;)
(I helped save b3ta! sPUNKer do your pictures for nothing get abuse for free, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 18:20, archived)
# random noise
probably on the sky

maybe a little blurring too
(I helped save b3ta! spacefish bong!, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 18:20, archived)
# black squirrels with tits.
(I helped save b3ta! HairyTwatter certified eel and sodium salesman, Sat 2 Aug 2008, 20:11, archived)