It's good. There's a lot going on, but the elements seem to balance nicely. Could maybe do with a space between 'SONIC' and 'intifada'...
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The Alchemist king of the needlessly complicated,
Tue 23 Feb 2010, 14:56,
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You could well be right.
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Mr Eraserhead Why aren't you a lemon?,
Tue 23 Feb 2010, 14:59,
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