Lovely from start to end.
Only one tiny niggle, I think you recorded your voice inside a cardboard box. The only part that wasn't super polished and brilliant
(, Sat 20 Jun 2020, 2:30, Reply)
thanks for the note on the voice- I guess I should do that in a proper booth. we're in a doing-everything-in-the-bedroom mode at the moment, but I could make one at home.
(, Sat 20 Jun 2020, 8:41, Reply)