All I'd suggest is the use of more rests for the whining synths, but I guess they're supposed to be unrelenting like that.
(, Tue 21 Sep 2021, 14:00, Reply)
But yes, this was put together and churned out surprisingly fast so the structure could benefit from a clearer outline, thanks :)
(, Wed 22 Sep 2021, 10:04, Reply)