crap sentance structure
no gaps = hard to read when I've a headache from staring at my computer screen all day at work.
may say there is "over use" of certain "things to make you sound a little cookey" and other things.
The writer and Phoebe from friends share a nievity as well as an inability to string together anything worth saying.
But good on you for trying to write stuff down. Keep at it and maybe you'll write something worth writing some day.
Thanks
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Nostrebor can't be everything all the time., Wed 17 Dec 2008, 16:34,
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