I don't think the narration adds much.
It needs to be clearer, more enthusiastic, and say something either funny or insightful.
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maninahat Too many cocks spoil the brothel., Sun 16 Oct 2011, 21:21,
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Thanks for the input
Look at our earlier videos, compared to them we're the happiest men on the world in this video! we're slowly getting there though.
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Snorty McBumhole YouTube.com/MinistryOfGeeks, Sun 16 Oct 2011, 21:22,
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