I think I prefered your first one. This one seems too... "ornate", for want of a better word, to me. So there isn't much of a PCO vibe left. (just an opinion obviously, no offence meant, and I REALLY liked the first one)
(, Mon 12 Mar 2012, 21:00, Reply)
I think you're right. Overegged the pudding a bit.
(, Mon 12 Mar 2012, 21:28, Reply)