Somewhat on topic...
I've tossed a couple of ghost stories of my own into the Off-Topic board. They can be found here and here. Constructive critique is always welcome, of course. However, I'll add that they're both pretty old and date from when I first started really trying to write.

EDIT: and here.
( The Resident Loon Not a demographic. Do not measure., Fri 4 Jul 2008, 18:51, 3 replies)

Ooo
They're both great. I LOVE the second one; great twist at the end I didn't see coming.
(TDub Nunc id vides, nunc ne vides on, Fri 4 Jul 2008, 21:31, closed)

I look forward to reading those in the morning
during what is sure to be an excrutiatingly dull day of scheduled work :-(
( chart cat has an itch, Sat 5 Jul 2008, 1:52, closed)

ooft
You are quite good
i like the funny ghostarguments at the end of the second one though
(Freddles, Sat 5 Jul 2008, 5:13, closed)