you click this here link
you'll see my first attempt
at poem haiku

www.b3ta.com/talk/8225
( Delete Me, Tue 24 Aug 2004, 0:20, archived)

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i can do poems well
but not haikus obviously
i wonder if this is
( connor, Tue 24 Aug 2004, 0:26, archived)

to make good haiku
you must use five seven five
in your syllables



edit: how could i get that sooo wrong first time ?
/spacktard
( sex and dougs and rock n roll, Tue 24 Aug 2004, 0:30, archived)

i think you mean
5-7-5
( asparagus time Is in Brazil., Tue 24 Aug 2004, 0:32, archived)