I've edited it because I think version 2 is better,
if you disagree then please lodge your complaint in this sub-thread for consideration.
(The Porcupine From Purgatory katsu revival trust, Mon 21 Apr 2025, 16:04, archived)

It’s ok, I edited mine too

( Cheers Cheers, Mon 21 Apr 2025, 16:30, archived)

I've considered your complaint.
hth
(The Porcupine From Purgatory katsu revival trust, Mon 21 Apr 2025, 22:55, archived)